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Can someone see me from the inside?
See me for what I am?
Can someone live the life I live
And tell with honesty "I understand you"
Without hesitation?

Can someone see the lonliness in my eyes?
See the river of all tears I've cried?
Inside me there is an ocean so deep
And I am drawn towards its bottom

I am drowning in my own sorrow
And there is no place for me to go
Somewhere I belong
Help me

Show me the light and the path
Show me the meaning and the essence
And I will always follow
And I will always follow your footsteps
In admiration of your strength

What else can I do
For you who lifted my sorrow
and held me up so I could breathe?

Looking deep into my eyes
I am afraid and I am sorry
Because I couldn't be the one you wanted me to be
I couldn't live up to your expectations
I am sorry for I have to fail you this way

But I will always remember and treasure
The shared moments I had with you
For me they are important
More important than my own life

I am sorry to leave you
Leave you who showed me to breathe
But maybe we'll meet again
Some other time and in a different life

So it seems there are still some more tears for me to cry
"Goodbye"
I at least know that I tried
©2007-2010 ~LeaTelamon
:iconleatelamon:

Author's Comments

I tried to be honest towards myself. There are many several ways to interpret this, but the main theme is of course lonliness and I realize that it's my biggest fear and also my best friend as I am not sure if I am brave enough to throw it away.

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:iconkittyrose:
Fantastic work and truly heart felt:)

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And I believe this may call for a proper introduction, and well
Don't you see, I'm the narrator, and this is just the prologue?
Panic! at the Disco
:iconleatelamon:
Yay, thanks. I am an expressionist when I write mostly poems so feelings work very well for me. :)

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Reality is like a dream; you never know what's real
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:iconheathertoy:
This poem is saying exactly what I cant right now. Thanks

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In the end everything is ok, if its not ok, its not the end.
:iconleatelamon:
Well, I wrote it mostly for myself but I guess it's a feeling most people maybe can recognize themselves in depending on their life-situation of course. But humans still have a need and crave to be liked, although some of us however may have been deeply hurt at some point in our lives so we are afraid to open us up again. Thanks for your comment ^^

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Reality is like a dream; you never know what's real
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:iconboredtired:
I suffer from Bipolar. I am always searching for my place in the world and this touched me so much. Thanks for sharing.
:iconleatelamon:
Well, good to see someone can appreciate your art :)

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Reality is like a dream; you never know what's real
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:iconvi-riddle:
Amazing Ideas. It was confusing, but in a chaotic way that added to the feeling of helplessness. I love it. I absolutly love it.

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:iconleatelamon:
It's nice to know you liked it so much :) It symbolizes a lot of feelings for me as well and is a stage of my life caught in a piece of small stanzas.

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Reality is like a dream; you never know what's real
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