I feel that my writing has matured a lot over the years and maybe I am finally able to move past the fantasy cliche, well, almost anyway. I usually never move outside the fantasy/horror genres, but I wanted to do something different and in a way this feels different. It's not horror, it's not pure fantasy either given its strong scientific roots. I want it to be cyberpunkish because I've gotten so attached to that genre lately and I have never written anything which can be considered cyberpunk. We'll see how it turns out I suppose.







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Hope that helps for you
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I really like the positon of the head, and I can get the head just fine with that slightly from the side angle, I just cannot get it seem to look slightly up, like here. I assume it might be something with the eyes, but I tried a few different positions as well as well as the nose, it feels I am missing some sort of line I am not seeing here.
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You should try using either a photograph or your own face as reference rather than a stylization. It is a nice stylization, but it is not accurate for what you want. This person does not have her chin up. She has her face tilted upwards but her jaw slightly open. Look at the angle on the jaw: it goes down.
It might be hard to see and not 100% accurate,but I redlined these for you to show you a rough idea of where the skull is underneath.
What is more or less actually there:
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Bloated mandible... and really big chin.
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Notice on this little asian boy from google:
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You have a softer angle, but you begin to see the shadow underneath the mandible. You don't see the shadow with the Bleach girl, and it begins to send mixed messages as to what is going on underneath the flesh.
And these random old people:
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The jaws ARE slightly open but they are looking up enough you can begin to see underneath them.
Here they are redlined with rough skulls:
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Notice the difference in angle between Bleach girl and the Old People? Its all based on that shadow underneath the jaw. THAT is how you capture the effect. Its really not easy at all...
Also, it is most helpful to think of the forms of the face in terms of planes and shapes, rather than finessing and stylizing the features. Also try and figure out what the skull is doing underneath the features first.
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